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Scored 100% on a Pangram of the first few paragraphs.

Things that alerted me. (Note that any one of these things could be fine and explainable, but so many in short order makes it obvious).

> And it rang. We both did our jobs.

What is the human's job here? Waking up?

> the whole morning minute by minute, as if someone had laid it out on a table and labeled every piece.

Labored metaphor that doesn't add anything. Laid out a minute? On a table? Even if we accept the non physical metaphor for style, how does that add anything on top of "minute by minute".

> I made two pieces of toast. The left one burned. The left one in my toaster always burns; my toaster has a favorite side.

This sort of short staccato phrasing is an LLM smell. It's hard to describe why precisely and how it varies from natural human text, but LLMs like to do this when writing fiction, especially when told to "write with a good style, don't write like an LLM."

Living in a totally conceptual space all day has major downsides on your ability to enjoy your meat suit. Meat suit firmware can only apply updates when you are offline. A lot of us are walking around with severe security vulnerabilities and runtime bugs.

Reading this story after staring at Claude-prose for weeks is a breath of fresh air, honestly.

Thank you for sharing.

What year is this set in? 2027? 2028? A lot of it feels like present day.

About the future: I don't believe it's really necessary to mix traffic and pedestrians on the same road. Certainly not 3000 pound vehicles and pedestrians. I think at some point we will start new cities with completely different assumptions from what we have now.

> About the author...Once, at the Nürburgring, he nearly collided with Kimi Räikkönen.

Anyone else here interested in road course tracking (HPDE) or racing? If so, where do you go?

I'm in the US Midwest and have been to Putnam Park, NCM, mid-Ohio, Pitt Race (private now...sad), and Ozark's.

> Will it rain over forty percent of the city?

Yes! x forecaster confidence

That was very good, thank you!

This is like a checklist of bad writing cliches

I am very amused that the agent speaks exactly like an agent in this world too

Very well written, bravo